Mini Blueprint Special
Clarity, feedback, and a lovingly sarcastic shove forward.
Let’s be honest.
You’ve got a story you want to finish, but right now? You’re stuck in that weird limbo where you aren’t sure if what you’ve written is brilliant or a hot mess.
You don’t need another writing podcast.
You don’t need someone to fix your commas.
You need someone to sit you down, hand you snacks, and say:
“Okay, let’s figure out what in the ham sandwich is actually going on with this book.”
That’s what this is.
It’s your story’s much needed gut-check.
Thoughtful.
Encouraging.
Honest as Hell.
And yes. There will be snacks.
Here’s what you get.
Minus the Fluff.
The Mini Blueprint: A Big Picture Analysis - We start with a guided questionnaire to help you get clear on what this book is really about. It’s not just the plot. It is the heart behind it.
It gives you a chance to step back and ask: What am I trying to say with this story?
This isn’t about judgement. It’s about reflection. You fill out the Blueprint, and I read it like a story detective with snacks. I’m looking for the heart, the holes, and the stuff you didn’t even realize was brilliant.
Then I reflect it back to you, clearly and kindly. But with enough sarcasm to keep it real.
No gold stars. No bruised ego. Just a “hey, this is what I see” from someone who loves stories and believes in yours.
An Editorial Review of the First 3,000 Words - I don’t just skim the opening pages and slap a post-it note on top that says, “needs work”. I approach them like it’s a very dramatic episode of Forensic Files. I comb through the scene for clues about what your book is really trying to do.
Using what you’ve shared in the Mini Blueprint, I will dig into what’s work, often more than you realize, what’s getting in the way, and why.
Maybe your protagonist has a quirky charm that’s not quite landing. Maybe your setting description reads like it belongs in an award-winning drama.
The point is: it’s all there on the page. You’re just too close to see it.
That’s where I come in. I connect the dots between your intentions and your execution, getting clear on what’s landing, what’s slipping, and what just needs a little untangling. Then I lay it all out with context and care. I add just enough sass to keep you moving.
You’ll leave with thoughtful, evidence-based feedback that doesn’t just tell you what to revise. It shows you why it matters, and where to go next. Not a red-pen shakedown. Not a vague “keep going!”
A real, honest map for your revision journey. One that actually helps you find your way.
50 Minute Strategy Session - You+Me+Snacks=A Plan
This is where it all happens. We hop on a call and talk about all things your story: your feedback, your vision, your questions, and your next steps. You get to ask all the things, vent if you need to, and leave with a clear path forward.
I’m not here to sugarcoat anything. I am here to help you remember why this story matters, and make sure you don’t quit before the good stuff happens.
This is for you if:
You’ve never worked with an editor before. Or maybe you have and it left a bad taste behind.
You’re craving honest feedback from someone who actually gets it.
You’ve been staring at your draft, wondering if it is salvageable.
You’re proud of your story, but overwhelmed by it.
You don’t want fluff. You want direction. And snacks. Probably.
You want to take your writing seriously, even if it isn’t published. Yet.
Black Friday
Mini Blueprint Special.
Black Friday Mini Blueprint Special.
Available through December 1st - You’ve been circling this enough. Let’s put a date on it.
Spots are limited - This isn’t a story feedback vending machine. It’s real, thoughtful feedback.
First come, first coached - When are you going to start betting on yourself?
Let’s Talk About the Investment
$299
This isn’t paying for edits.
It’s investing in the one thing every writer actually needs but rarely gets:
honest, thoughtful feedback from someone who’s in your corner.
Not a critique partner who disappears mid-chapter.
Not a friend who says “it’s good” but doesn’t tell you why.
Not vague notes that leave you more confused than confident.
You’re getting a real partner in crime. Someone who reads deeply, asks a lot of questions, and actually gives a damn about your story. I’m not here to coddle you. I’m here to back you all the way through revisions.
This is about forward motion, and finally feeling like you’re not doing this alone.
Real Clarity.
Make it
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