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The Investment:

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You’ll come away with clarity, direction, and the confidence to keep writing.

Minus the stress spirals and the caffeine jitters.

Let's Start the Fire!
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IGNITE THE STORY:

THE FIRST 30-PAGES

You’ve got words on the page. Maybe a few chapters. Maybe a whole messy draft.

But something feels off.

You can’t tell if your opening is pulling readers in or quietly losing them. And that uncertainty? It’s exhausting.

Before you spiral into a full-on “my book is terrible” meltdown (it’s not), let’s take a clear-eyed look at what’s really happening in those first 30 pages.

The opening of your story holds everything. It is the foundation for what’s to come. This package helps you figure out what is shining, what’s stumbling, and what just needs a little fine-tuning.

This isn’t about ripping your story apart. It’s about understanding what you’ve build so you can strengthen it and move forward with confidence.

What’s Included:

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Inline Comments
In-depth feedback written directly in your manuscript, exploring the emotional layers beneath the plot, pinpointing where your reader might drift, and showing you exactly where your story already works.

Editorial Letter
A big-picture analysis that connects the dots between your story’s vision, structure, and emotional impact so you can see how it all fits or where it’s wobbling.

Next Steps
Tailored advice to help you write your story forward : clear, compassionate guidance that gives you a real plan for revision, not just a list of problems.

60-Minute Coaching Call
We’ll meet to unpack your feedback, answer your questions, and get you unstuck. No judgment, no confusion. Just an honest conversation that keeps your creative momentum going.

Who It’s For:

Perfect for new fiction writers who’ve got a start, or even a full rough draft, but can’t tell if the story’s hitting the mark. You want honest, big-picture feedback without the side of judgement. You’re ready to dig in, learn, and make your story better.

The Hype Girl Promise

I’ll always tell the truth; straight up, no sugarcoating, and definitely not like an asshole.

I’m here to help you turn those first 30 pages into something that burns bright.

Equal parts story coach, emotional support human, and snack enthusiast

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