You’ve got a story in your head, a half-finished document on your desktop, and an overwhelming sense that maybe, just maybe, you’ve bitten off more than you can outline.
Good news! You’re not broken. You’re just a writer.
Writing a book?
Welcome to the Chaos.
I work with new fiction writers who’ve realized that “just write the book” is possibly the most unhelpful advice on the internet.
You’ve started. You care! You’re trying!! But somewhere between character arcs, plot holes, and the vague terror of sharing your work, you’ve hit the wall.
That’s where I come in.
Hey, I’m Kyle Turley - The Hype Girl Book Coach, story nerd, and professional question-asker.
My bread and butter? Helping you stop spiraling about whether your story “makes sense” and start actually understanding it. I will always be honest. I’m sorry it feels brutal sometimes, but I’ll never be an asshole.
I’ll cheer you on, help find your story’s weak spots, and make you see the brilliance that’s hiding under all that self-doubt.
Basically: tough love, with snacks.
Ignite the Story
Ignite the Story
Your story’s beginning sets the tone for everything. And right now, you’re too close to see what’s really working. Let’s fix that (without you crying over your keyboard).
In this deep-dive for fiction writers, we’ll focus on your first 30 pages, the messy, magical beginning of your story, and figure out what’s strong, what’s confusing, and how to bring it all together so readers actually want to keep turning pages.
You’ll get:
📝 A detailed editorial letter - honest feedback full of insights that connect big-picture story structure to your specific pages, including actionable next steps to help as you write forward
💬 Inline comments throughout your manuscript - real-time reactions, guiding questions, and proof of everything mentioned in your letter (because yes, I bring receipts)
🎧 A 60-minute coaching call - where we dig into the feedback, untangle your “wait, what?” moments, and create a clear plan so you don’t lose steam halfway through revisions
This isn’t a red-pen of doom massacre. It’s professional story feedback with heart. It is designed to help you understand your story, not fear it.
You’ll walk away knowing:
Exactly what’s working (and why)
Where readers might get lost
What to focus on next to make your story stronger — without drowning in overwhelm.
If you’ve got a story and the creative chaos is getting loud, this is your reset button.
If you are looking for someone to tell you your story is flawless, I’m not your girl.
Are you looking for someone to help you make it work, to untangle the plot chaos, to hype you up while telling you the truth?
That’s me.
I’ll help you fall back in love with your story and believe, again and again, that you can finish it.
Ready to get unstuck and get real about your story?
Let’s light that spark and see where it goes.
What the hell is a book coach?!
Basically? I help writers wrangle chaos, build stories, and keep their sanity. You bring the words. I bring the sticky notes and snacks.
Curious how I can help you reach your writing goals?
Writing’s tough. But you don’t have to white-knuckle your way through it. I’ll help you shape the story, stay focused, and actually finish the thing. Snacks, sarcasm, and solid strategy included.
Now, grab your favorite snack, and let’s get to work.
Want to learn more? Schedule a free call and see if book coaching right for you.
There’s no commitment, pressure, or obligation.